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The setting of “Jailbreak” is a small farmhouse close to the
(fictional) Surrey State Medium Security Penitentiary. Some
of the characters are prisoners who’ve escaped from Surrey.
Others are simply caught up in the action.
Surrey isn’t a jail for hardcore, violent criminals. Mainly
it’s filled with an uneasy mix of nonviolent repeat offenders,
first time violent criminals (usually crimes of passion), and
drug users serving mandatory sentences. It was recently the
home of “Father Freedom,” a cult leader convicted of fraud—
though he was guilty of a great deal more than that. In any
event, one of his followers drove a truck full of dynamite and
blasting caps into the wall during his exercise time, and he escaped
into a waiting car driven by three other devotees. Four
other prisoners (Morton Willits, Steve Updike, Juan Riccinto
and David “Icepick” Leyner) escaped in the confusion—taking
Corrections Officer Jake Spundie with them as a hostage.
They made it to a highway just as an unseasonable hailstorm
began. At the highway, they commandeered a car driven
by Janet Mattice and her client Donna Ngwashi. They immediately
took to the back roads—not noticing how low on
gas the car was. When it ran out, they approached the nearest
farmhouse, where Morton cut the phone lines. They plan to
hide out until the heat dies down, then take off in the morning.
The house is home to Uder Krazmersky and his wife Ella.

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 of the characters are prisoners who’ve escaped from Surrey.
 Others are simply caught up in the action.
 Surrey isn’t a jail for hardcore, violent criminals. Mainly
 it’s filled with an uneasy mix of nonviolent repeat offenders,
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 event, one of his followers drove a truck full of dynamite and
 blasting caps into the wall during his exercise time, and he escaped
-into a waiting car driven by three other devotees. Four
+into a waiting car driven by three other devotees.
 other prisoners (Morton Willits, Steve Updike, Juan Riccinto
 and David “Icepick” Leyner) escaped in the confusion—taking
 Corrections Officer Jake Spundie with them as a hostage.
 They made it to a highway just as an unseasonable hailstorm
 began. At the highway, they commandeered a car driven
 by Janet Mattice and her client Donna Ngwashi. They immediately
 took to the back roads—not noticing how low on
-gas the car was. When it ran out, they approached the nearest
+gas the car was.
 farmhouse, where Morton cut the phone lines. They plan to
 hide out until the heat dies down, then take off in the morning.
 The house is home to Uder Krazmersky and his wife Ella.
 = Characters =

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 The setting of “Jailbreak” is a small farmhouse close to the
 (fictional) Surrey State Medium Security Penitentiary. Some
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 hide out until the heat dies down, then take off in the morning.
 The house is home to Uder Krazmersky and his wife Ella.